I like the repetition of 'havoc or golden day' adn this stanza -
Love is now my fear,
sorrow is now my fate.
Crying is all I hear,
gold soul is now too late

^excellent xx

This is soo amazing! I love your word choice, the repetition you used, the meaning, and the way it flows..You have amazing writing!
Luv Always
Casey J

Wow, u kno u are one of the best poets ive seen in a long time. this was just..wow! i dont know wat else 2 say

Great poem i can relate to it