The title stood out for a love poem one. There were a few spelling typos, though, such as:
red it while the sun rose,
*read*
etc so you may want to go through it again. It seemed more like a story, which is good, but you might want to read it over to double check that you've avioded cliches. It really is a good poem and seemed to have a good flow. It was grouped together but did keep my attention.

I liked it especially the last few sentences and i love the title.. but for me the rhyme scheme seemed all over it was still a great poem but you might wanna go back and double check ...

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

A beautiful poem, I like it. A few spelling errors though. but other then that, great!