This was really good. I loved it, More then words could express. Just keep writing kay hun! 5/5 for this though. (I would give it higher, But i can't =[ lol)

luv natalie x-x

Thats a really good poem, and its reality. the 1 thing a great poems needs:reality.
oxox romes

That was really good keep it up

This is a really good poem. It is very motivating and gives I'm sure it has given many hope. Keep it up, I'd love to hear more from you :)

OM.... THAT was absulotly amazing... its such a good poem. Wow... I dont know what to say, just keep it up!!!!!

Jade XOX

OM.... THAT was absulotly amazing... its such a good poem. Wow... I dont know what to say, just keep it up!!!!!

Jade XOX

This poem was very very beautiful!

This was a beautiful poem and it really made me look at my life now. tho we all get down at times..there are always people there for us! thank you for writing this and keep up the great work!!
XoOx

That poem was great:)

THIS POEM ROCKS!!! RIGHT NOW I AM AT A POINT WHERE EVERYTHING SUCKS SO READING THIS POEM IT INSIPRED ME. YOU HAVE TO GO ON WITH LIFE. NO MATTER HOW MUCH IT FRICKEN SUCKS. GREAT POEM!!!

I love all ur poems they r absolutly fantastic!!
keep up the good work
xxx

I loved this poem, I like your writing style in general. 5/5

That was a great poem! your an awesome writer keep it up!
XoOx molly
p.s. thansk for the comment

GREAT POEM!!!!!!I LOVED IT!!!!!!