Comments : The way things are

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Great job =] Could have made it longer, But it was still good!

    - natalie x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by Destinys Pain

    That was a great short poem. It's so true too. I weally felt that... keep writing, you're amazing.

    s2-a s h

  • 18 years ago

    by Ian brennan

    This is a really good poem and like you wrote on mine it hits home for me on several occasions. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more of your work