Comments : Leaving

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awwww. This is so sad. I hope you really don't feel that way.

    Fav Lines:
    "I tried to live
    The best I could
    I always failed
    Sadly misunderstood"

    It was a great poem! 5/5

    luv natalie x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by Kate

    Hye mitch .. this is intense i truly liek it cause it seems sorta liek what i am going through to the point where i wanna be the oen leaving .. sometimes i think boys just play with girls heads then other times i think they are sweet and gentle and wish taht everything was perfect but then he blows me off and tells me he still likes me when i kwno he really doesn't but i'm just a silly little girl and he makes me beleive himand i do .. then i realize how much i am being used
    oh well right
    - Kate

  • 18 years ago

    by **..Shell..//

    As usual.. gd poem .. short n sweet sentences. makes it very effective.. xxshellxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    A good and well written poem, but its kinda the same as teh others...
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Dude your rhymes are fantastic. really nice job. i did like these lines:
    I tried to live
    The best I could
    I always failed
    Sadly misunderstood

  • Hey Mitch I really like this poem to alot of your poems ralate to me in a way because Ive been depressed for about 2 years now and it just got worse. Keep it up!!