Hey, i liked this poem..i think its very good, and it has a beautiful meaning...great job..5/5

p.s. thnks a lot for ur comment

Yupp so true and yeah it is good :D

This poem is fab! Chock full of meaning and you really get your point across nicely without being too preachy.
I like this one =)
5/5!!
Luff Gem xx

Very beautiful and very positive. i like it. u have talent. thanx for the comment too.
love willow xxoo

This is a good one too!!!!