Parts of this escape me, your thinking is very deep and very profound.

However i feel it very strongly, the meaning is there, but i cannot fully grasp it, such is the greatness of this poem.

However i realy enjoy the simple nature of the ending.

I look forward to further intellectual challenges from yourself.
Keep it up.

Jon

Some great thought has gone into this poem and its really well expressed, keep writing u definately have a talent xx

This poem is actually a misc one that makes sense in an odd way. It's really deep but filled with imagery that you can't escape.

I felt ... but I'm not sure what ... for my mind is wandering now in all the images you invoked. Keep on writing!