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This is pretty good for a free-verse poem. there is strong imagery and u evoke strong feelings in your line breaks
by shobhana kumar
Very well written Ley. the emotions come out so strongly in this - very raw; but wonderfully portrayed.
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You really written soo very good i cant even find a word to describe how beautiful you wrote those lovely poem, as lindz mentont it there is strong imagery; so keep up the good job...
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