Comments : Your Memory

  • 15 years ago

    by lindzy

    This is pretty good for a free-verse poem. there is strong imagery and u evoke strong feelings in your line breaks

    Lindz

  • 15 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Very well written Ley. the emotions come out so strongly in this - very raw; but wonderfully portrayed.

    thank you very much for your comments on my work. i really appreciate it.

    love and peace
    shobhana

  • 15 years ago

    by Jay-Jammal

    You really written soo very good i cant even find a word to describe how beautiful you wrote those lovely poem, as lindz mentont it there is strong imagery; so keep up the good job...

    Much love from

    Jammal