U knw i dnt knw wat to say........thats jus WOW......breathtaking 5/5. the whole poem jus flowed like the calm river. nice wrk i really enjoyed it.

nami
xoxo

This is just as good as the last...bye hun

Voted as 3, thats so unfair. this is such a beautiful poem, i dont know what exactly people need to be satisfied...lol

great write dear, very emotional indeed.

all the best and take care
5/5

Gorgeous and powerful and amazing! keep it up girl xxx
sammi x