Comments : Beginning of forever

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    Awww ur poem is soo cute!
    i feel that way about someone too...
    well done:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Awh, hey bert. =) i've missed reading your poetry. great job here. thanks for the comment, you made me smile. i'm doing good, how about you? take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey beautifully written this p0em itwas great. a t0uching piece. thank u heapz f0r ur kind w0rds 0n my p0em - ive been g0od, just busy with sk0ol n stuff. neway keep up the great w0rk!!! =]

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    That was a very nice poem thanks for the comment...never ask yourself why they don't love you, ask who will love you for who you are! =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Oh I loved this poem! THat first stanza really got me interested which is a great thing in poetry because you need to grab the readers attention! I absolutley loved this write! You expressed your emotions very well and point taken!
    Good write!
    Chels

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    This is full of desperation , emotion and confusion - all which encompass the feeling we know as love...your poetry is always such a pleasure to read my friend...This piece took me back to a faint memory of a time long ago when I once felt the same...great write great use of your emotion

  • 18 years ago

    by rar

    This is a very good poem. i cant wait to read more of you poems. i jsut really love the way u write. good job. keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Ur poem was really awesome!! moved me to tears actually!!!
    I really like it..its so emotional~~
    keep up the good work
    NemO XxXxXxXxXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by p4y5c0

    Hey this was like maybe the best poem i have ever read its a wonderful poem i loved it! you did a wonderful job on this poem keep up all the great talent you have!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Samantha~

    I so loved it!!..Keep up the great work...i give u 5/5...

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Amanda~

    Very well done, i luved how u began the poem it wus great!

  • 18 years ago

    by bethan

    THATS such a beautiful poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats a very nice poem! yet it was confusing in a way ! but filled with emotions and love!

    keep it up!