It was very good just make sure you cheak your spelling and stuff i have to say i really liked it keep it up

Was this the one you wrote in liu of the club disscusion?

If so i think it is very good, i feel it has captured the feelings well, personaly i have never missed some one from so far away, but i know the same feeling when they are quite close, but not here.

This is a very nice poem, and its great to know also where the intial idea came from.

Great Work.

Jon

Really good poem hun! you captured the hardships long-distance relationships face as well as the lust that keeps them together!
Well done sweetie and thanks for allt he advice and help etc.
*hugs*
luv angel fish:P