Very nice poem, you are a true poet. your words speak it self. a 5/5 poem. keep it up.
If you have time pls visit my poetry so i could get a feed back from you.

I loved the last stanza.. those lines were very well written....
you're a great poet.... and the girl who falls in love with you will be very lucky.... so, keep your hope high...

5.5

Much love,
Ipsita

DEar,
You got a ure oqn unique way. Ienjoed reading ure words.keep it up.