With every smile there comes a tear

i love that line

Wow..your poems and pieces of writing are always amazing.
"With every smile there comes a tear"
that line is really deep,a beautiful write.

Kat

"Every breath i take is full of fear, with every smile comes a tear"- great lines, just like everyone else has said
That means its good :)
if you have the chance, please check out my poem impulse
- Words are only treasured when they are truely spoken

Wooow i love the last two lines =]
thats amazing and so is yoor other
poetry
keep writing and keep up thegood work

check out mine??=]
love alice

Wow , i realyyyyyy love the poem , 5/5 for sure , oh and thatnk you for the comment on my poem , it means a lot to me

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Very straight forward. I like that in this poem and felt it convayed that very well.

It is a very good poem and felt that it had the emotion that some poems lack behind it.

Thanks for the comment on my poem, i always return the favor.