Comments : A Whiter Shade of Pale

  • 18 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Congratulations on winning the challenge for this title!

    Great work!

    Thank you so much for participating!

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Very deserving winner jacklyn, well done to you, this is a wonderful poem, lol the title makes me sing the song every time I read it! Like I said brilliant poem, the third stanza was fantastic! well done once again! Sorry I haven't checked up on your work much recently, I am glad I have found the time to!

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    "My midnight hands danced upon her
    As two tongues collided, becoming one"

    Wow, I love those lines!!!! This is such an outstanding piece. Your careful choice of words brought this piece to life in such a magical way.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly