Andrew, thats a really good song. I liked the emotion, and heart you put into it. I hope everything works out, and this girl.. she realizes that you are trying to help her, not "hurt her". Nice work hunn.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 4/5

Hey! It's so good to see you writing again! And, I love this! I love all your stuff though...:o) Talk to you soon Cooz Cooz!

Hey Andrew,

I really enjoyed this poem. I just want to say hang in there, this girl will come to her senses and realize you you care and are only trying to help her :)

hang in there hunn