Comments : Where to Go

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Nice. i like the repetition of the world ending bit. and love the last line. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    The second last stanza you wrote 'boby' instead of 'body' thought you might want to fix that.

    The world will end sometime, because nothing is forever. Humans will be the one to destroy it. I agree with this poem. Good stuff.