I'm not a fan of self harm poems and the idea was cliche but this poem did keep me in suspense which made it stand out to me. It wasn't lenghy and didn't keep repeating this and that and it was much easier to keep me focused. I got this picture in my head (I tend to have an overreactive imagination. Writers curse.) and it's like you want to help but you can't.

Theres some good stuff in this poem but u should try to transfer your talents to a happier subject!! xx

Very well written peice, it is short and too the point really capturing the reader thoughout

5/5

Awww, This is so sad. I really hope you don't feel like this. *hugs*

It was a great poem though. So short, But filled with so much emotion, I honestly loved it! Keep it up! 5/5

luv natalie x-x

I like your poems, ive commented on all of them so far, i like the style that u write in, dnt let nyone tel u its nt gd, cuz there rong.be gd to talk sumtime, ur in my favourites so ill keep cheacking bak .. keep it up.xxshellxx

Aww! that was so good and really well written. uve deffinately got talent! keep up the amazing work! 5/5

Hey I like this one to but this is my fave. Im a cutter and I realized today that cutting dosent prevent the problem you in it only makes it worse.
Keep it up!!!