Damn impressive Sole...this is one stroke of genius...I'm blwon away...all the way to where you are meeting me today infact

Absolutely amazing poem. near perfect rhythm and rhyme.
as for in your comment about not seeing why vincent is bad...he came into my room, and strangled my friend. for no reason at all. tell me how that isnt bad hahah

Brilliant peice, the form and structure are great and the rhyme perfect with no sign of being forced.

5/5

I liked how this one was different then you usual ones. It did have a strong sense of imagery to it. I think your weakest points though where the short lines about decay and never nothing anything but that. But that's just me. Your whole poem flowed well though, the title stood out, and it seemed damn well decent for a life section poem.

Awesome, it slows very well, and is good and catchy. mwah