Awww, how sad, i hope those false smiles become real for u oneday- good poem
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That is a really cool poem,
although i did get sort of lost but then thats cause im an idiot :P
I agree with ├Truely_Spoken┤, hope those smiles become real one day :)

Great poem! I like the way you can exppress yourself, Thanks for the somment on mine!

Hrmm thats a very different way 0f writing, but i really liked it!! great p0em! go0d luck f0r the future and thanx f0r c0mmenting 0n my p0em ;x l0ve maddy x0ox