I loved the title, so I had to check it out!

I loved this poem. Fantastic writen. Beautiful! Very well done once again =)

Lotsaaaaaa love
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Nice poem. The only thing I can think of, by way of a critique on this poem, is the misplaced letter in "makes the world seems new."
I liked the change from pre-dawn sun-rise to day. Nice concept in it's entirety.

Beautiful write. nice job. i love it! keep it up bub!

take care - hannah