I am a failure at everything i do
so maybe you can give me ideas on what to do

I am a failure at everything i do
so maybe you can give me ideas on what to do

Are these poems true? I don't want to hurt yourself! They are written farely good but...

Aww, Sweety, This is sad. I really hope this isnt true. If so, I'm always here if you need to talk.

You expressed your feelings very clearly. But I do think you could go a little deeper. Really digg in deep. Explain how much it's hurts that god won't let you take your life. Just a bit of an idea. 5/5 Though. I thought it was great!

- Natalie x-x

Wow this is such an amazing poem i like the bits at the end about suicide and stuff :]
your an amazing writer
5/5
lovelove
Alice
&&thanks for the comment @]
xxxx