You poem was hot as hell

What an interesting write. For me, I felt for a moment like I was taken back into childhood, when we didn't know how difficult that yellow brick road of life was going to be ... but the blinders came off ... and I walked along with you through the ups and downs ... sharing the pain through the years. Perhaps I was Toto!

Wow, Gary. This is so powerful, especially that last line... The creativity in this poem is amazing, every word was perfectly chosen.
"like the tin man
I feel so hollow, for it is hard
to have a heart
when walking alone."
^^^ I especially love this stanza, simply incredible.. This is by far one of my favorite poems ever, love it to bits! :o)

Hey gary, nice one. i read this for the first time. actually i got carried away to Oz. simply spellbound. keep writing.

This one is fantastic Gary! The Wizard of Oz was always one of my favorite movies.

Gary everything you write is amazing! I really liked the comparrisons to the caracters of Oz. One of my all time favorite movies. Great work!