That put a smile on my face!! It was so beauifully written!! Another amazing job!! I like how you dont put your poems in stanzas or at least the ones i have read!! 5/5!! Awesome!!

Wow.. i LOVED this poem.. it was soo romantic and sweet.. it was just beautiful! the flow was excellent and the rhyming had no mistakes as far as i can see! keep up the wonderful work!

Very catchy poem, excellent flow

Loving singers comment:

i love the frist part , and the question ,

i love this ,

jsut do it in paragraphs , not one peace , it would be a grreat one

I really love this poem