This is beautiful. Wonderful imagery and great adjectives to build an elaborate love story

Sondos

I don't say this alot but this poem was amazing. I loved the imagery that the story (poem) presented. I don't know if love should be capitalized at the end butt it does make the point stand out. Wow...I really can't believe this.

Bhavin, sorry for the delayed response to your work. this is a good piece of work!

keep it up!

take care
shobhana

Another wonderful poem by a master of poetry...ur poems always touches the heart...i wish i knew where u come up with the ideas.......they are amazing..and i love them......this poem was so beautfiul and innocent in so many ways