Awwww, thats a really sad poem, it shows alot of anger, up set and blame am sorry, you have a great use of words and feeling and i think its a brill poem well writen god bless hunni * xxxx

Imagery is great. And so are the words.

"Angels cry trechery,
Creepers lurk to smile,
Another mystic wonder,
Last only for a while,"

That was a great part yet the rest was also well done. Those lines set up what turns out to be quite a good vivid piece.
~Faith

One of my favorites yet... I love the new one...

Yeah thanx for all the lovely comments on my work, it really helps to read feedback.

With some adoration,
Rave

Awh. im speachless i dont no what to say at all. Omg amazing!

Hey Moo Moo : )
yes, this was yet another masterpiece from Miss Emma. Very well done my friend, Kudos to you. lol
-Suz
xox

That was really, really good. I'm adding you to my favorites.

Thanks so much for your comment. By the way, i hope nothing bad happens b/c I accidently pressed the complain link on your comment....so sorry!

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AMAZING. I LOVE the way you write. AMAZING. amAzing.

Great poem, It flowed excellent

Wow u really made a picture out of that one. loved it, excellent work

All i can say is beautiful!! that was wonderful in some parts scarey but the depth of it was insane

Your poems seem to get better every time I read them. This is the second time, and it just blew me away.

I don't know how this one is lower than a 5. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.