I like this poem, having read your explicit poems i was rather worried that maybe you had the wrong i dea about things... that maybe you had missed out the whole idea of love in place of lust.

But this has reasured me, that you do have good emotions, i think it is lovely.. to hold someone or to be held is a wonderful thing, and i think you have captured it well.

This is the kinda thing i like to read!

Well done!

Jon

I love this poem so much it's amazing! keep up the awesome poetry