Aww.. datz nice and pretty unique :) i especially like this bit:

ill take your hand
and say i love youu
ill place a rose
and promise to be true...

itz so cute... keep writing!

jessy

This poem show's great love from you for your someone special.. really liked it xxx

Very nice poem...speaks from the heart :)

Thnk you for ur comment, and i really enjoyed this poem, perhaps we can stay in touch? That would be great.

L8r,
Caleb