Not your best you say, but good nonetheless. The raw feeling of pain is evident and well portrayed.

and although i dont enjoy the concept of self harm or suicide.. i feel the ending does however do justice. Somehow it is different, somewhat detached, but yet effective.

Jon
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Very good..
ive been there a time or two
if its true n about you dont give in ta the razor ive done that too it only makes more problems n its soo much harder ta recover
jus keep your head up n believe in your self
much love
always alana

Wow i thought it was really good.. i agree with it not being your best.. but it was still great keep it up 5/5

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