I really enjoy your style of writing. Our writing seems similar, even though I don't show it in most of my poems. This poem was a joy for me to read, and I loved how you were able to rhyme and still have depth.

This is a great poem. It has some pretty awesome imagry and i really like the use of metaphors in the first paragraph.

This is an awsome poem! 5/5

sorry it took so long for me to reply i havent been in town lately, thanks tons for your comment...your an amazing writer great work cya around :)

Maturity has a price. :)