Comments : Dedication To You Baby

  • 18 years ago

    by Allen

    Wow that poem was FANTASTIC... Very well written. I love that poem. hehe that person is really lucky to have someone like you. Great choice of words, flow, rhyme they perfect.. I really like this one

    "No one can battle against the odds is what people say
    But they don't have someone like you to to push them all the way"

    that was a really great poem. well done keep it up. 5/5