I like this poem! u should cheack out my poem DEATH
~!ugly & unloved!~

I had meant to comment on this poem a while ago (but was too distracted by your other poem "anyways" - which completely freaked me out, btw)

so here's my thoughts on this one: i can't seem to hit upon a good enough word in the thesaurus to describe it ^_^" it's short, yes.. (as is my preferred poem range) yet *brilliant* - especially with the visual format (which is more important than most poets believe - since, superficial though it may be, it is still the first thing that attracts readers to a poem: the look of it)...it flips my stomach upside down how professional it feels, and...i must admit...a tinge of envy

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on another note, i simply *had* to thank you for commenting on Bird's Eye View....i've been waiting for that one to get noticed - it was the first of my featured poems but never had votes or comments....that is...until now :)