Awh, its sad. But really good.:D 5/5

Another amazing poem. you are a talented writter 5.5

thanks for sharing

EXELLENT!!!! i loved it! this poem just rhymed so perfectly, ans moved so smoothly. te flow was perfect, and the message was clear. your choise of wording was also exellent. thanks for your comment! keep writing

Ruby

Great peice, the flow was perfectly smooth thoughout with no rougth areas what-so-ever. the content clear and well expressed thoughout and the interest constantly held.

5/5

Another great poem. i love:
No longer am I half-alive
No longer do I bleed
In water and fire, I'll survive
I'm done with other deeds
I will fly, I will soar upon stars
Never looking back again
I will reach my soul far
And be Who I really AM!

amazing end to the poem. the entire thing is just perfectly done. great job!