Omg..... Oh....My...GOD!! That is..... BrillianT!!
man, Ruby, You seriously hit me where it hurts with thsi one. i can relate soooooooooooooooooooooo much. The ending, oh my gosh, the ending. it was amazing. definately your best by far. either it's so remarkable because i can relate, or it's one of the best poems i have ever read... in my LIFE!
congratulatoins Ruby, You are now awarded 5 stars for skill, and an A+ For sentiment : )
always
-Suzie
xox

I just love the ending of this poem. it is truly beautiful. this poem had alot of heart felt emotions...and it just...wow lol this was a great poem 5/5