Great poem, I can relate to it
KEEP WRITING ;)

Your poems are great and keep writeing i can relate. hope all is well with everything.

When my family is sleeping, dreaming sweet dreams
im wide awake, crying, and trying not to see
I feel so alone in a crowded room

That first stanza, wow, I was in that postition about 6 months ago! In December there were sooo many times I cried myself to sleep, I felt no one could be trusted, I was confused about my future, felt so lonely like you described..But I'm a fighter and I'm strong and I know if you just hang tight and hold on too you can be where I am, smiling all the time and laughing for no reason! Hang in there!
Thanks for all your comments by the way! It means the world to me!

Such a sad poem, it was delicately written I found myself wispering it for some reason....very nices work....

[lostlaureate- come find me]

Such a sad poem, it was delicately written I found myself wispering it for some reason....very nices work....

[lostlaureate- come find me]

Wow that was amazing, I loved the part about being alone in a crowded room, it was very deep, you are very talented, keep writing!

Hey that poem was really good... i can really relate to itt

Hey that's really good, sad though. Keep on writing :)

I really luv diz 5/5 i can relate

Thank you for you comment, on my poem!
I like this one! It really reflects your emotions and how you are feeling. Keep it up =)
xxx

OMG.what an amazing piece..You know,that sometimes happens to me too,when you have the feeling that no one really can feel how much you are sad and hurt while you are just looking for someone to listen to you or try to understand how you really feel.

Excellent.5\5..