I love this, so beautifully written! Flawless flow with a wonderful choice of words, well done! :)

Absolutely amazing...perfect rhythm and rhyme. i'd choose a favorite stanza, but quite truthfully I like all of them :). keep up the good work

Absolutely amazing...perfect rhythm and rhyme. i'd choose a favorite stanza, but quite truthfully I like all of them :). keep up the good work

This is superb! I really enjoyed this one, made my mouth water... Such a chocolate enticing poem. The use of the form is outstanding and the flow exquisite!

This is such a beautiful poem! The flow & rhyme scheme was perfect. And I liked the repetition of every last sentence. Great job! 5/5*