Keep up the good work :) I liked this one.

*is unspoken* 5/5

Very good as well. I like it a lot. Rhyme scheme is slightly iffy in the third stanza, but what's a comment without some slight criticism to help improve? This poem was excellent, and I couldn't do better. Five out of five.

Excellent poem. The rhyming was great

Oh and thanks for the comment you gave me. it was greatly appreciated!

Hey thats pretty good

This one kind of reminds me off my parents attempts to understand me, i know they are only trying to help, but i dont want there help, i just want them to leave me alone.
anyway, this was a great poem and thank you ever so much for your comments on my poems, it really means a lot to me that you have taken the time to read most of them and offer your thoughts.i am sorry that i have not commented back very much but my time on the computer is limited and usually i only have time to post my poems then my parents kick me off.. grrrr but i will try and comment on more of your poems from school! i will not rest until i repay the favour i swear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xX velvet kisses Xx