I really dont have any words to say. This kind of just stole my heart... its really touching. I enjoy your stuff... keep writing...looking forward to many more....

God bless.

Sammib

Awsome Poem!,loved it, I reccomend you keep writing because i will definitly keep reading :)

I loved it. it is a story within a poem.Very good. : )

Its such a crazy kool poem. i loved it. it keeped me thinking trew the whole thing thank for commenting my poem

Love Always,
Jessica

Nice. the lenghts of soem of te lines were a bit off. but the idea was great. the wording was pretty good.

Ruby

Awesome!!! That was some wicked poem keep up the writing :) check out my lyrics I have on my page if you want. and rate them :)