Awwww how sad =(
sad poems here are really expressive!!!
I hope this will turn to be okay..I liked ur poem so much its meaningful and I feel the words stright from the heart
keep it up
Luv
NemO XxXxXxXxX

Great peice, very well written and powerfully expressive thoughout. though i think that the ending could be improved... the conten of it is fine but the actual wording i feel could be better. the rest of the peice is very xpressive with a good structure and loads of feeling.

5/5