Gosh this is really good. Although the flow and length isn't as great as it could be, it is such an amzingly unique poem which draws you into it, I just wish it was longer! I really like this one, keep writing you are great =D
- Polly xx

Gosh this is really good. Although the flow and length isn't as great as it could be, it is such an amzingly unique poem which draws you into it, I just wish it was longer! I really like this one, keep writing you are great =D
- Polly xx

Good work