I know just the feeling jacob, I think you have captured it wonderfully.

In fact i know the feeling alot, the doubts, the not knowing, the will it work outs? the will it ruin it?
Ah such is life..

Hmm, yes a great poem.
Well Done!

Jon

Great peice, well protrayed thoughout with some good expression. it may be relitivly short but holds a lot of depth.

5/5

That was lovely, it was so well written and expressed well. keep it up
xxx