Comments : Message from the girl

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Awe baby, this is such a sad poem=*(

    I love how you describe this through the eyes of a child. And the way this child sees it, feels it and thinks.

    It's a very powerfull write hun. I loved it. FANTASTIC!

    Lotsaaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    Awww...thats so touching & sad...
    Very well done...it really touched me
    Keep writting!!!!
    -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by aimee

    That is so emotional and beautiful, I like the way you made it so frabrent and wonderful n sad at the same time. good job

    xxo
    love stained sheetz

  • 18 years ago

    by aimee

    That is so emotional and beautiful, I like the way you made it so frabrent and wonderful n sad at the same time. good job

    xxo
    love stained sheetz

  • 18 years ago

    by bex

    Wow
    just reading through this makes me want to cry
    you've written this really well, asthough you're actually the child
    the part about learning to ride a bike is so cute
    great jobxxx.