Woah... so deep and meaningful. Wonderfully written sir!

This was the most moving piece I've ever read...

The stanza Britt pointed out is defiantly a fave of mine as well.....This is so crazy if its true about you Bill and one think I have to say is THANK GOD YOUR ALIVE! Well I am extremely proud of you for changing for the better, sets a good example for youngsters like me!! I loved this wrote Bill and I apologize for being so slack on reading your poems!
Chelsey

I'm liking this too.. Sounds very thought-out, and thought provoking.. where do we come from.. where do we go.. what has been pre-defined in our lives.. Thank you.. I have used my brain to read again, & taken inspiration, so that my own poetry may improve.. xx

Bravo Billy. ...This poem is thought provoking, indeed. What a remarkable message you are sending to us all. Thank you for sharing...

Wowow i like ur poem its good hey check mines outt:)

Wow, this was captivating and quite an intersting piece.
Your attention to detail really brought this poem to life. I could hear and see everything as if I was right there...well done!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Wow this is a very positive poem keep up the good work! :]

Bill, this is really awesome!
"Violence has always been part of my life
This time there has been a change
Moving away from anger and strife
My life I decided to rearrange"
^^^ This stanza is incredible! A beautiful and inspiring piece... ;o)

Heya hunnie, once again i must say..you truely are inspiring...keep up the good work!!
Rosie xx

Wow, very nice poem, great from begginning to end hun. You keep writing like that, and you could really get better. ^_^

I'm very impressed, seems lie you've been on a fantastic adventure. keep sharing man, keep sharing!

Very nice and beautiful