That was breathtaking, it was so sad n strong n it felt like i was watching happen n I felt really really bad but it was an incrediable write and i'd love to one day be half the writer u r. I gave it a 5/5 cause that was just beautiful!!!!*

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This poem is so great n Excellent u put so much emotion into it. Can i ask a question did u really do this? well hope i can talk 2 u soon.I give ur poem a (5/5)

This poem is so great n Excellent u put so much emotion into it. Can i ask a question did u really do this? well hope i can talk 2 u soon.I give ur poem a (5/5)

I liked the way you finished off your poem. it was a surprise ending. loved it.xoxo.

I love it it is so great i can totally relate to that good job you have talent

I know u did write it i was saying if u actullay did that becuase i have but i didnt die

Hey yet again another astounding poem. i have to admit i'm running out of adjectives. your writing really involves the reader and they are so hooked they can't stop till they reach the end. you are so gifted. keep the comments coming i love to hear / read what you think. feel free to email me or add me to msn.

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Wow. thats amazing. i still cant get over how good of a writter u r.