That was breathtaking, it was so sad n strong n it felt like i was watching happen n I felt really really bad but it was an incrediable write and i'd love to one day be half the writer u r. I gave it a 5/5 cause that was just beautiful!!!!*
Hey yet again another astounding poem. i have to admit i'm running out of adjectives. your writing really involves the reader and they are so hooked they can't stop till they reach the end. you are so gifted. keep the comments coming i love to hear / read what you think. feel free to email me or add me to msn.