EXELLENT!!! i hope you win or won hte contest!!! exellent. the best part of this poem was the imagry. you have a real talent for that.

the repetition of teh frist line in each stanza was very effective.

an exellent poem
Ruby

I bet you'll win
That was FABULOUS
one question.....wat does 'kudos' mean???
lol
you're comments made me laugh, except for the one stating moo moo
lol
thanks snoo
love
~Em

I liked this poem a lot. I liked the last stanza the best.

In the cold light of morning
She was forced to conform
But innocence chose death instead
And so her blood marks "dawn"

Keep up the good work. 5/5

Wonderful poem! I bet you'll win that contest. The stanza was excellent 5/5

I'm yet to find out how i do on teh centest, but thanks for your comments and your wishes : )

You'll win i am sure, i loved that poem as much as any of yours. xx good luck
keep writing
Love Tara-Kay

Wow.. Brilliant poem. I loved it so much hun. So beautifull written, once again with a fantastic flow. I love the story it tells, it's so sad.

Wow.. what else can I say about this poem? It's just fantastic!

Loved it!

Lotsaaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Im sure you'll win.
this poem is really good. Its really well written with a great flow through it all.

Kat

Intrigued.
Speaks yet it's dead.
I like this.
welcome to my favs

"The blood is yet to cool"... HAS yet? Has sounds better than is, in my opinion. Feel free to ignore me though :)

"Innocents" needs an apostrophe - innocent's.

Also, I think "judgement" is spelled judgment. Might want to check on that.

Sorry, I'm a bit of a grammar/spelling Nazi. Part of being an Editor of a paper for several years.

The poem itself is fantastic though, great word choices and description usage. :)