Comments : Is It Too Much to Ask?

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey great message and u potrayed it really beautifully, very nicely penned

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by .::Lovely*Letdown::.

    Wow!! I couldn't agree with you more about this concept!!! I'm so glad you wrote this poem to show people how bad abortion really is...killing something inside your own body...HORRIBLE!! but this poem is extremely good!! I don't think i've ever read anything quite like it!! God bless!! If you have a chance check out some of my poems...maybe i could get some advice from such a talented writer!! hehe GREAT JOB!!! 5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by alana

    Wow thats really good..
    i was kinda lost when i was readin it thank god you put that at the bottom then i went n re read it n i soo got it.. VERY GOOD!!!!!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by RussianPrincess

    Hey thanks very much for the comen on my poem "Someday". this poem is a really good poem with a lot of depth. i myself have had to make a deicion concerning the matter in question and if i wouldn't have made the deicion i had i wouldn't be the proud mother of a beautiful four year old baby girl...my deicion had nothing to do with my future...it was about this childs future...but it is possible to be a teenage mum and to go to school an do something with your life like i have...i finshed high school and last year when i was 19 i finished my law degree and i was married when i was 16...i am now a partner in one of the biggest law firms in brisbane...and i couldn't be happier

  • 15 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I didn't read it as abortion. Your talent is apparent. Loved the part about the rainbow. I am a sucker for rainbows, duh, huh?, lol.

  • 15 years ago

    by Olfat

    Great poem. very nice penned
    i liked it very much, you are such a talent writer
    if you can then check my poems too and write comments plz i want to know how my writing is, and what i change
    what is good and bad
    thanks

    Olfat

  • 15 years ago

    by Lyn

    My goodness!YES YES YES! I did know this was a baby talking to its mother.A wonderful poem. I have only just discovered your writing. I will be reading much more. You are a very talented writer. If you are interested I have written two about abortion."Is This What God Has Willed" and "Situational Ethics"

  • 15 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    It came off where it could be taken for many other meanings and not just the one you portrayed. Nice flow and words with the imagery of the metaphors. Really it had been something good but not exactly one that I was interested in during the middle. Strong beginning and ending.
    ~Faith-less

  • 15 years ago

    by Esther

    I really thought it was quite good but i thought that u probably have to have exprianced a loss of a child 2 fully understand it!

  • 15 years ago

    by Esther

    Experiance and imagination co-incide, to have a lot of experiance in sad things makes you more open to imagine them!!