Comments : Land of make believe

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley

    Wow. Great poem! I can really relate to this. Keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    Wow, I really love reading your poems, I can relate in a different sense. You're an amazing poet, keep it up. And thanks for your comments I really appriciate them :)

  • 17 years ago

    by physco

    Wow, that was awsome 5/5 xx oh and, thnx for the comment n vote on my poem xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*~Yours-Truly~*~

    Wow, this is a really good poem, 5/5, keep up the good work. And thanks for the comment :)
    ~*~Yours-Truly~*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Whittney

    Wow, this is an amazing poem, you are very talented. thankyou for the comment on my poem too~whittney

  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer

    Hey, this is a really good poem, I love ur poetry, I can relate to this poem and I love the emotion that is in it...keep it up 5/5
    Jennifer

  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Nice concept and good flow!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Indeed it makes you think and consider many ins nad outs of a perfect place and exactly how much oppurtunity there may be.
    ~excellent
    ~Emma

  • 17 years ago

    by Amy

    This is my fave so far from you. Simple && short. I like the concept of it and the ending.
    xxx Ami

  • 17 years ago

    by rachel

    This was a great poem. the concept was creative and the lines flowed nicely. great job and thanks for the comment.

    -rachel

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    I just can`t tell you how good I think you are, beautiful!