Wow. i really really liked this. soo good.
you're an awesome writer.

Fantasticly written peice, good flow and structure with fantasticly expressive content. well written in general.

5/5

Fantastic....excellent flow such a deep poem that really makes you think...i love it.

Very dramatic Writing ..... "I loved it!"

All the best
Dave.x

Wow this is really good.. The title is what caught my eye.. very interesting. I love the way that you worded everything & it flowed very well. Great job on this!

Beautiful poem... one of the best i've read
5/5
love
amy

I really like this poem, like all ur others!!! keep up the great work!!
5/5
Luv FallenxFromxGrace