You have such a gift. You are a wonderful, talented writer and it shines in this piece. Well done!

Bill is right, this piece is just so beautiful. Your talent really does shine. I am very impressed with this one :)

I wonder why you were in the hospital but it is clear no matter what reason, you really knew how to make the best of your time.

This poem kept my attention all the way through and with your other poems that I read I think you do have a talent that you shouldn't waste. If you decided not to use it, I think it would be a real loss.