Comments : Poison

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    WOW i cna relate ot this..not the drinking but holdign sumthing close as a cruth..for instance cutting and cursing. way to make the reader feel apart of this..great job.

    Lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Janette Rmz

    NICE I LIKE YOUR WAY OF WRITE YOUR POEMS.