I loved this poem... it speaks true love... I have the same feelings... I lost my mom a few years ago... :( it's hard to go on day by day without her... knowing that she's not here to help me when I need her the most... but keep up the good work... this poem is truly a piece of art!

One day in the future,
As i lay down to die,
I will think of you dad,
Think of you and cry

that was my favourite stanza... but definatly not the only one this was an awsome poem 5/5 :)